1. Missing The OLD YOU...
It had been quite a while
That I didn't at all contact Meagan...
At times, I feel guilty
Yet at times, i feel that she's not worthy...
At times, I shed tears thinking of wad haf became of our friendship
It was and it still is hurting me,
So much so that I feel like...
I'm going to give up,
Giving up on this friendship that will no longer bloom its colours
Thinking about the times we spent together,
Those fun, sweet, funny, sad, angry... memories,
Just reminds me how deep and how much I miss my dear friend...
All I can say is....
" You Changed... I MISS THE OLD YOU!"
That I didn't at all contact Meagan...
At times, I feel guilty
Yet at times, i feel that she's not worthy...
At times, I shed tears thinking of wad haf became of our friendship
It was and it still is hurting me,
So much so that I feel like...
I'm going to give up,
Giving up on this friendship that will no longer bloom its colours
Thinking about the times we spent together,
Those fun, sweet, funny, sad, angry... memories,
Just reminds me how deep and how much I miss my dear friend...
All I can say is....
" You Changed... I MISS THE OLD YOU!"
2.Fireworks...
As I dazed out of the window...
The sky loomed dark beyond with sparkles of fireworks
That seemed so pretty... so gay...
And yet the emptiness still existed,
The feeling of losing something, someone...
At the sight of this scene, I realised...
How much I am missing my dear friend
The void within me, longing for her return
The feeling is just unbearable!
Why have you neglected me my friend?
Is our friendship like the fireworks?
So beautifull at sight yet so quickly disappearing...
But even if it does disappear,
I will always remember you and all the memories we shared...
Just like the fireworks I witness today,
In the raven dark sky,
Overwhelmed by loneliness...
No matter what happens,
I Love you... My lost friend
Plese give some comment on these poems and tell me which is better~ Thnks~
-God Bless-
As I dazed out of the window...
The sky loomed dark beyond with sparkles of fireworks
That seemed so pretty... so gay...
And yet the emptiness still existed,
The feeling of losing something, someone...
At the sight of this scene, I realised...
How much I am missing my dear friend
The void within me, longing for her return
The feeling is just unbearable!
Why have you neglected me my friend?
Is our friendship like the fireworks?
So beautifull at sight yet so quickly disappearing...
But even if it does disappear,
I will always remember you and all the memories we shared...
Just like the fireworks I witness today,
In the raven dark sky,
Overwhelmed by loneliness...
No matter what happens,
I Love you... My lost friend
Plese give some comment on these poems and tell me which is better~ Thnks~
-God Bless-





2 comments:
Hey, girl. I seriously think that 'Fireworks' is WAY better... :) All the best!! Luv, Dav
I love the fireworks de!
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